Chas,
Like you I am not well versed (no pun intended) in Christian music. But I sure as heck like this.
The intro and outro are very cool albeit simple.
I really like the ominous feeling to the instrumentation, nice work.
I agree with whomever said the voice should be more up front. It does get lost from time to time. Perhaps a bit more treble on the main vox too. (just my knee jerk opinion on that).
On the strings. . . I got no opinion. I can't do midi, so if it is half way nice it always sound amazing to me.

Good work,
Tom

[This message has been edited by Somefellow (edited 03-20-2006).]