Well, after a 5 1/2 hour drive down from San Jose tonight (do you know the way?), this was a surprise. A sneak post! I wasn't expecting to see it up for a day or so. I think that Girl and I need to talk. [Linked Image] Now, a few thank yous are in order before I hit the sack.

Noel. Wet? [Linked Image] I can't believe you said that! That whole couplet may not be necessary (looks like another comment to that effect down below, too), so we may be able to dry this out after all. And yes, I think we may try again. Thanks!

Chucky. Cheeez? [Linked Image] If you got an instant head tune, that sounds like a good thing to me! Much better than a headache. [Linked Image] Besides, with talent like my cowriter's, it's hard to go wrong. She steers me from my excesses....

Corey. Yep, we went round and round over those two lines. I'm still not all that cozy with them yet. It's like I told Erica, that last line needs to, well, climax the whole lyric. We'll be talking. Thanks for the rest!

Cindy. The "B" word? Shiver. We can take that, I think. Thank you. Two Roman thumbs down on that couplet. One or two more, and it's a goner. It was on shaky grounds when we wrote it anyway, so it won't be painful if it goes. Your favorite line? A last minute solution to those troublesome last two lines of the chorus. Sounds like it works! And you offer an interesting bridge solution, too, if not exactly as written, the idea of how it segues (is there an echo in here?) back into the chorus is quite good. We'll ponder that one, too. Thank you, my friend, and yes, we'll see what we can do about LA. [Linked Image]

And to my writing partner. You have an amazing talent with words. Thanks for the dance! And keep my name on your dance card! [Linked Image]