Good stuff guys. really like it. Just a few comments.
I could be splitting hairs here, but you mention the sun is just setting, and then you're chasing the moon across a midnight sky. Seems like a jump in time that might not be fully setup at that point. Just something to consider, and maybe not worth considering!
I don't think you need the last 2 lines of the chorus either. I think they're good, but it just seemed natural to end it on line 8 to me..it felt like it was "done".

On the bridge:

With each town that slips by
I'm closer to your side
My heart just can't wait
To exit this interstate

Just some other thoughts on it. Basicallly the same with less words. I don't think the last 2 lines are weak; just thought it might be a bit wordy, but then i'm known for short bridges.

Really nice stuff guys!

Blake's Songs