Well now my favorite girl is back!!
Eric-ah what a nice name....

And you have come back in style!

This is simply beautiful....The key word being "simply" Nothing forced and images so clear and easily related to by anyone....Real clever stuff.

I really think this is a killer chorus!!
Like Tink I love those last two lines.

Like that old vetran Corey wrote it sort of goes a little negative in the wrong place in that second to last line of the bridge.
Now I'm not trying to get you in trouble but you'd hate me if I didn't say so...

I truly love this chorus and I hope you two get a super melody going and then throw it at us all again so we can listen.

Nice to have ya back. How much did you lose at the tables or the machines........opps sorry , not my business..


ERIC......nickname.......RICK

If you're going to judge someone, do it on the side of mercy.