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TV Drama
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G'Mornin' Lady Di!
GREAT Hook/Concept!
Consider Condensin' Chorus a bit: "And the Universe RESPONDS in-kind" "(And-delete) You'll see it in a Light that's New"
Maybe "Instead of SOMBER GRAY December cold" &.."And each DANCING Drop of Morning Dew"
Last Chorus, perhaps start Last Line off with "THAT" & eliminate 2 "The's" in a Row.
All K-O-S, "KUDOS" for an Inspirational One Well-Penned, & Good Luck with it!
Big Christmas Hugs, Stan
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