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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Joined: Feb 2001
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Lynn,
Nicely done! Love your epiphany/unexpectedly rhyme...that's pretty awesome! Anytimne you can rhyme a 5 syllable word in a lyric, you've done good as far as I am concerned! Also like the "song fairy" reference in that line.
From having read many of your lyrics and critques of others, it's hard to believe that you've been doing this...songwriting per se...for little more than a year. I'm impressed!
Thanks for your great poem and sharing your story so originally. Good Show! Hope that 2007 moves your songwriting in all the right directions.
Alan
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