Morning Todd...and yeah welcome in.

I too like the suggestion to switch 1 and 2...though I know it messes with your revised chorus...and maybe play with these changes to see how it works...flows a bit better for me, but then I'm probably not in your melody


You said you tried to leave him but he wouldn’t let you go
You need superhuman strength to break his heart
You said you tried to tell him how you really feel inside
But he stops you each and every time you start
You keep going through the motions living with the pain
I know what you’re feeling because my feelings are the same




If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop