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Hi Todd,
Just reading through real quick, it might be a good idea to start off the song with the 2nd verse being your 1st verse.
The second verse establishes the who/what/when and where of the Lyric immediately, and there's not a lot of "guessing" about what is happening. See what others have to say, Hope this helps a bit:)
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