Lynn,

Thank you for your read and crits, i am going to change that line.. it has bugged me for a while, and my stubbernness has kept me from it. the chorus souds nothing like the verse. shouldn't be an issue.

anaphlyatic shock is what kills most of the people stung by scorpians. Those fire ants are no joke. (i hate them) i hope he laughs this one off and quits wrestling in giant ant hills. be good lyrical goddess.

-steve

ps mortars aren't really that dangerous. it is a pot luck thing, un aimed ordinance with a kill radius of like 15 feet.
you almost have better chances at being hit by lightning.




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