Hey Steve,

Nice write!

This:

"i can't find a way to waste my time
that don't keep me from her:

had me scratchin' my head...is he trying to find a way to NOT think of her? ...if so, wouldn't

"i can't find a way to waste my time
that'll keep my thoughts from her"

or something comparable, be more easily understood?
It's the "can't" followed by the "don't" that throws me, I think...

--anyway, a minor nit in a real heartfelt lyric,

Yours is a deceptively simple looking chorus that tells so much about the singer.

Best wishes,
Mike



Last edited by closemike; 07/24/07 02:21 AM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)