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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/13/26 11:28 AM
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by Michael W. Brown - 10/10/26 08:09 PM
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Tiffany,
Nice to meet you, don't believe I've had the pleasure. You have a very soulful delivery in this take...the story is one that is delivered in the bridge , which is where I was thinking I would take the music and the melody somewhere a little further from where it is now...this being your worktake you have the chance to do a little rewrite there melodically and
peak everything where the story peaks, right there in that bridge...sorry if I'm redundant I don't read all the other's comments so I can offer an unbiased opinion...for what it's worth...hadn't gotten even free coffee with it lately...ha...good luck and save a little of the vocals for that peak I was talking about, you don't have any trouble with the peak, it's just the place to put it I think needs a lil' tweak...Marlene, I like the way you've woven this story...good luck with it...Moker
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