OK Melissa,

I like it LOTS!!!!!! So then I take the time on it. Here's what I got. It is SO good, just small things,but the biggest one is to eliminate some SHE AND SHE'S ....IMO

V.l...Line 4 SHE'D BEEN (for a better flow)

v.2...Line 5 Cuz I was scared of WHAT ELSE MIGHT BE HURLED



Chorus: Great...just need to get some SHE out of there...

Line 2 Omit AND

Line 4 That girl's fiesty; she'll tell me quick

Line 5 Ain't no puttin' up with my...woo..hoo

Line6 Most times, she's the sweetest thing in the world

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE BRIDGE.....

You know, what I have found, is that when we write a song in the midst of some real emotion, we may write thinking it won't turn out to be much; just a way to let off some steam. But, when we do that, we are writing from a very real, non-contrived place, then it ultimately turns into some of our very best work. That's what I think happened here....so GREAT JOB....You probably didn't expect it,(believe me, I've had it happen)But, I think this is GANGBUSTERS....GO FOR IT!!!

Hope you're thinkin' UP-COUNTRY....That's how it reads....

Sincerely,

Jan

http://www.soundclick.com/janicehopkins