Hi Eric

I really like this.

Love how you alluded to moon 'shine' in the first verse, very clever!

and this feels really fresh in my mind, ...not easy to be fresh in this genre either !

Need a cure for memories
the soul eatin kind

As far as the 12 bar 16 bar thing, my understanding is that those are the standard forms, BUT the doors been wide open for all kinds of variations on the theme....there's a fellow I like a lot who is doing innovative blues....uses a banjo on some and is more story teller. Mark Lemhouse, you might like listening. Has one called 'Paper Sack' an awesome drinking tune.

Carry on ! smile jm


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