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Kaley,
This is quite beautiful. Wonderful job by everyone! My only thought is that you could have used Christ to rhyme with sacrifice in 2nd part of the 2nd verse.
And though He was innocent
The crowd cried....Cru..ci..fy
He gave His perfect life
As sacrifice
Al...le..leu...iah.. For he is the Christ!
Just a thought. It's quite lovely as is.
Last edited by Wendy D; 03/19/08 11:29 PM.
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