Thank you Wayne....I'm really glad you liked this...and thanks for reviewing the lyric.!!....and giving me your thoughts...
THANKs!!!

When the demo was done..., this line..was changed a bit....
Overshadowing sorrow ....to smooth the line..as it was sung by the vocalist. But I don't think leaving it open to interpretation...hurts there..(jmo....) ....

Ok..following you on your thought process ....on sinful history, Wayne and understand your reasoning.......

Thanks for your suggestions!!!..and for thinking it through....

very best to you this afternoon smile
Kaley

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