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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2006
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Hi Beth the wordsmith, I always enjoy your posts. They are always witty, but usually have an offering to help improve a lyric as well. Guess what..I like your bridge idea. Actually I like the first two lines w/one small change to one word since they always say try to avoid the heart/apart rhyme so the heart/start rhyme also may not be encouraged so I thought maybe: Crossing the line's never easy, There's no going back once you do, It's a chance that I'm willing/ready to take, Please tell me that you're willing/ready too.... I may add it above as an optional bridge. Thanks Beth and I hope you had a blessed Easter!!!  Best, Lynn
Last edited by Lynn Orloff; 03/23/08 09:53 PM.
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