Hi Dan. This is vastly improved from the previous version. The guitar work is great. Love the slide. This has a much better overall rhythm than previously.

I have 2 suggestions. I think the slide guitar would be more effective if you used less of it. Use is more as a color part than a rhythm part. But that's just personal preference.

2) there is something seriously wrong with your vocal sound. The vocal sounds like how the lo-fi versions sound on soundclick. The guitars all sound fine. It's just the vocal. It's like somehow you lo-fi'd your vocal. That's gotta be fixed IMO. Did you do this on purpose? If so, I'm not sure it works... having a funky vocal sound with normal sounding guitars.

Anyway, really good improvement.

Peace,

Ian

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