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by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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Hi Caroline, Hi all, Thanks to all of you for listening and for your compliments. It sure means alot to me and I am sure Caroline too. I have taken a little time on this song, but I think we might finally have a final. After Sub sent me a REAL music track, I went back and did all the vocals over, and more in the backups. I took all your comments in, and Carolines wish for me to give it even more soul and cut loose at the end. then I read this comment: Caroline: This has got a great gospel feel. Great easy to get lyrics with punch and honesty. My only idea here, is to build in a lift into it. i.e., as you get into the song, bring in additional voices and instruments- not too many- but slowly one at a time build it until you have rousing end to the song. WHen I am listening now its promising a knock out punch but sorta pulls that punch and ends softly, which is fine for some, but I started getting a strong Aretha feel in the middle here (Good work Letha!). I would say just think: where would Aretha go with it?
Very good work!
paul I did my very best, and remember, there is no one in the world like Aretha. But I have loved her since I was young, so I came as close to a song she would sing as I could. Now, If she would only sing it lol. Sub added something that inspires a singer I tell you! So much better than a thin little casio sounding chording behind it lol. Thanks so much Sub, and Caroline. I sent it to Caroline today, so I hope you all get a chance to listen to it when she posts it, and I hope you enjoy it. Letha
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