Hi Caroline, Hi all,

Thanks to all of you for listening and for your compliments. It sure means alot to me and I am sure Caroline too. I have taken a little time on this song, but I think we might finally have a final. After Sub sent me a REAL music track, I went back and did all the vocals over, and more in the backups. I took all your comments in, and Carolines wish for me to give it even more soul and cut loose at the end. then I read this comment:

Originally Posted by Paul T Wentworth
Caroline: This has got a great gospel feel. Great easy to get lyrics with punch and honesty. My only idea here, is to build in a lift into it. i.e., as you get into the song, bring in additional voices and instruments- not too many- but slowly one at a time build it until you have rousing end to the song. WHen I am listening now its promising a knock out punch but sorta pulls that punch and ends softly, which is fine for some, but I started getting a strong Aretha feel in the middle here (Good work Letha!).
I would say just think: where would Aretha go with it?

Very good work!

paul


I did my very best, and remember, there is no one in the world like Aretha. But I have loved her since I was young, so I came as close to a song she would sing as I could.

Now, If she would only sing it lol.

Sub added something that inspires a singer I tell you! So much better than a thin little casio sounding chording behind it lol.
Thanks so much Sub, and Caroline.

I sent it to Caroline today, so I hope you all get a chance to listen to it when she posts it, and I hope you enjoy it.

Letha