Ok Mag,
This is very interesting, good imagery. I'm curious abotu the title, Bad Blood Girl. Typically, (here anyway) Bad Blood means people are not going to get along in any way. I was reading, got a melody for this as I read along, but I'm really stuck with the title. I was wanting it to be more of the Rambo feel that you have, this is what I was wanting to hear...(and this is just me and my opinion)

She's a First Blood, Girl
looking for the last of bad love
contenders suffer nightmares and chills
and when she's all worked up and thrilled
they're happy to die
from that First Blood, Girl


The bridge is throwing me a bit, the last two lines....

and in the evening she's out there ropin' em
with her hips

Ropin' is repeated from the Vegas line, which makes it feel like you gave up, and just put down whatever came to mind, which takes away from all the efforts of imagery in the verses, imo.





Caroline


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