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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Feb 2006
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Brenda,
I think this chorus is better. The dove in the bridge is kind of a surprise. The ray of light makes him drop the bottle. The ray of light is his ray of light.
otherwise you might just let it sit a while. Come back to it later and see if it satisfies you. If not why not?
looking good,
John
Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never had an editor.
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