nice song and interesting presentation.

Consider getting the melody of the last 2 syllables of these lines the same as the "yearning learning"...2 syllable rhymes

I've had a string of bad ones
One night stands 'n 'shouldn't have dones

I'm done with all the yearning
Kept missing love but now I'm learning

Leave the roller coaster behind
As a beholder he looks fine in my mind

Last edited by Neil Cotton; 06/29/09 09:20 AM.