Hi Ricki,

Very nice collab!

I like the alternating, layered vocals in the verses, the guitar slaps, the harmonies in the D/C/D/C part.

It has a coffeehouse, kinda Suzanne Vega feel, and a little beatnik thing going on too, I love all of the above.

On paper I didn't care for the identity rhymes, but they sing fine.

I enjoyed this very much. smile

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 06/29/09 11:33 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)