Hey all, love it, all of it. A quick fix for the issue Scott mentioned, which when I read it, I had the same thought, is to dub "grandpa" in "fluffy's place" and then he's in the beginning, and it may make more sense.

Vocally, great, lyrically awesome, and all around, touching, perfect melody...two thumbs up!


Caroline


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