Originally Posted by Al David
Steve,

really, really nice! I grew up near the confluence of the Missouri and Mississippi Rivers...right on the Missouri and a ten minute drive from the Mississippi. I've skipped a bunch of stones in my earlier days...then a bunch of school...then, oh well, never mind. I could hear the soft wafting of the waves near the shoreline.

A trade-off to another lead instrument somewhere in the middle would take it the to the next level, I think. An acoustic guitar or a soft wind instrument would be great! Regardless, this is very beuatiful and nicely done.

Alan


Thanks Al. The consensus seems to be that this need something more. The problem is...there doesn't seem to be much room for another melody line (ala nylon guitar part).

Great to hear that your wife is back home!!!!


Steve

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