I don't overly mind off-color language in a song, but to me there is no prosody in the sound and it just isn't "conversational". Now I've heard this on the radio 50 or more times and I've always heard it as "Toes in the water, toes in the sand" so maybe it just sounds so different (of course, "toes" twice never sounded right either). The rest of the song is pretty good -- I really like the chorus.

Hmmm, I wonder what the radio played for the "lawn chair" part?

Kevin


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