Well you guys have certainly given me some thoughts for a rewrite. I tend not to post stuff I'm actually done with & this one has been a particular source of aggravation. I believe the only other individual to see this - who will not be welcomed to offer comment on anything else - compared trying to do an edit to "taking a hunk of rust out of the junkyard."


Kate <3

– "The strongest drive is not love or hate. It is one person's need to correct/modify/alter/edit/change/rewrite another's copy."