Originally Posted by Janet Snow
I like this a lot. I noticed you called ring a rang in the chorus, but called it a ring in the verse. This is no big deal, but that's the kinda thing that could be pointed out by a pro (which I'm not). Where did you record? The writing is very good, but the music could use a better mix IMHO. Anyway good job.


Hi,

Thanks for your input!

Many people cut and paste chorus and rhythm sections today and also use auto tuner voice software. Each one of my pieces are different. Nothing was copied or pasted. I guess the word "Ring" just came out that way. It was not really planned. I can always fix it.

The song isn't mixed much. I recorded the whole thing in my bedroom. I play all of the instruments, since I can't find anyone around here to help me out. Most people around here only want to play cover songs. I may still work on the lyric, if enough people tell me that it needs it. I will do a mix and master after I get the bugs worked out. If you hear anything else that you don't like, please let me know!