Janice
I like everything about this song. The lyric is well crafted, every line in it leads to the title, it's a great story. The music Prosody is perfect and the demo very well done. The vocal is right on.

But
It's an old story. been done many times
Having said that I guess it really doesn't matter. Like they say it's all been written.

But you might have said it different and better. It's a great angle.

Good job on this one.

Bill
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