Love the lyric, melody is good but I have to agree on the 80ish sound. Sounds very much like a Barbara Mandrell or Dolly song. Not sure if a tougher vocal would make a difference, but it is a demo, so don't let any of that stop you.

(yes, I know, it's really me,in the print!!),


Caroline


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