Hi you two,

Pretty lyric and Tammy did anyone ever tell you that you sound alittle like Ricki on our board. That's a compliment to both of you. My only thing is the last line of the Chorus feels like it should go somewhere differnt melodically than it currently does. I feel like it kind of hangs there somewhat, although at the end w/your 2 Final Chorus' it is okay there.

Best,
Lynn smile


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