Oh...this is a great song!

I love the melody, the vocal fits the tone. Mork, great work...Tam, wow!! I'm listening again.

The only thing I am hearing (or not hearing)in the third verse...since it's a rock song, I was waiting for the vocal to lift in the third line. It feels like its the same all the way through, I wanted that build when listening. Could just be me, haven't stretched my rock muscles in a while, but my ear wanted it and expected it. Other than that one little nit, I love it!!!


Caroline


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