Hi Polly,

Hey it looks like I'm a late comer to this one. I gotta tell you they say that some of the best songs come from personal experience--and while I'm sorry you had to go thru this before you could write this song--it is one of your best. I originally thought it was a bit on the long side--but that's only cause there's a 4th verse. That being said it fits in well with the story. I know they tell us to shoot for around 3:30 give or take. So depending on the melody you have it might be just fine time wise. Everything else about it is great. nice metrics, great feelings nice flow. You've got a great one here--just sorry what you had to go thru to get it done. Take care,
Roger

Roger Sosnowski
The happiest people in life are those involved in music