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Hi Wendy,
I loved it. I loved the harmony on the last line of each chorus. My suggestions would be to speed it up just a touch, I think there is room for that. I would also try to add a bridge after the second chorus to make it more dynamic. But I really do think it is beautiful and your voice has a really beautiful tone to it. I look forward to hearing some of your other songs. Tracy, Thanks so much for listening and giving me your thoughts on this. I agree it could be sped-up a little. I'm still getting a feel for playing it, etc. I also agree with adding a bridge, but I'm thinking a musical one. It means a lot to me that you liked it since you write such beautiful songs.
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