Originally Posted by Scott Campbell
Very nice, Wendy. I love the harmony - I think it sounds great.

I might lower the harmony volume just a little bit - not much, just a touch.

Lyrically, it worked great for me too. Only line that gives me some pause is "You wanted pink roses, but I was not able". The line basically works for me - maybe not just as strong for me as the others.

Is a nit - it's lovely - as usual for you. smile

Scott


Scott,

Thanks for listening. I think you are right on your two nits. I will lower the harmonies some and put it back up. Also, on the "I was not able line" that was a last minute change. It was actually "I was a potato" which was whimsical but seemed to detract from the overall song. I couldn't think of anything to replace it other than what I have now. But I do think you are correct. Whatever should be there will come to me eventually (I hope).

https://open.spotify.com/artist/2YHxGUvESQz2KVWX7tGfLo?si=j7Uu4cSLRLmwhBBn75e68g

https://open.spotify.com/artist/5wYxBeX6HkRciSVwmn9bdr?si=UmPlCB5gS0SHRie8_wXo5A