Hey man that was pretty cool. I was digging the vibe, the music was very cool and I liked the lyrics...

The perfect voice would help this really come to life.
Also the only line you could have worded more vaguely was

"Why did she have to cheat on me"
It was the only line that didn't fit the whole picture.. It was like an old Country song line. I wanted more "Hey Joe" kinda lyrics..

But that was the only small thing!

COOL.... MAckie! smile


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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