Hey Kevin,

This one sounds really nice. Cool melody and chord pattern and the fiddle gives it an Americana flavor. A memorable chorus melody that people could be singing along with.

The tempo is just right IMHO. Better too fast than too slow and dragging.

I agree with Ricki that the lyrics would be enhanced by a bit of editing. Carve out a few unneeded words and the singing will be easier and smoother.

Good one!


Colin

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