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I really like this, Kevin - the chorus in particular sticks with me - which I reckon is the thing you want to stick.  I dig the imagery in the verses. However, I think this might be a case of being able to catch them because they were written down in front of me. So I agree with Ricki and Colin - maybe rephrase some of the lines or drop some words so that the listener can keep up. Is a keeper though Scott
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