Thanks Ricky,
A bit out of my territory but new folks on the boards sometimes have a hard time getting much attention.
I'm not sure how much of the scenario as you give it, will come across without an explanation but "vague" can work too as has been demonstrated many times
I undestand what you're saying in the closing 3 lines of the C ---I think probably in most cases you can tell 'em and tell 'em and they still don't or won't get it. However you could still take from what you have, that you wish you could find the right words to get through to her.
Maybe some will chime in who are more "in tune" with the genre.

A story needing told again and again. I'm always amazed, with all the supposed "liberation" and "progress" supposedly made by women, how this kind of thing seems to go on and on
Write on
Wy