Originally Posted by Lisa Gundling
Hi Kyrk,

This is cute!

One line that struck me as sort of forced is "make my cholesterol good" -- I think I'd change that, but I'm not sure to what! Also, the "nutritional facts" like kind of struck me as needing something else too.

Thanks,
Lisa


Lisa,
Thanks for commenting, I'm still struggling with this and hopefully I will be able to come up with something.
Kyrk


I have never been lost, but I will admit to being confused for several weeks. (Daniel Boone)