Hello and welcome to JPF, Dzoc808:

Don't be "put off" by any negativity you may have sensed here. We have gotten to be rather "picky" in this modern age where any living room can now become a recording studio... LOL!

I agree with Donna. It is a pretty and "today" sounding tune. I'm surprised you haven't received a ton of PM's from our members, many of whom are pretty darn good lyricists. Naturally, it won't hurt if you "snazz-up" the demo but for pete's sake, don't spend a ton of hard earned money... after all, none of us are big-time artists or producers yet! Please be encouraged and stick around. You're gonna love it here.

All my best,

Dave