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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Jan 2009
Posts: 6,339 Likes: 6
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hello NG.
as all ready mentioned you do come up with some great ideas and hooks BUT my "nit" would be the wordyness of this lyric.
do not know if I have asked you this but do you have any of your lyrics up somewhere with music and vocals? I would really love to here the mixing of the two to give me an idea if I am right or not when it comes to the "to many words".
besides that observation I like where this started from but like Micheal I question the third verse and its place here.
have fun and keep them coming.
douglas
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