Originally Posted by DonnaMarilyn
Good call, Fran. I was hoping you'd get rid of it. wink

Donna


Hi Donna, do you think this would work??
I would appreciate any suggestions, from
you and other songwriters for this verse.
Thanks..

V1)
Called, and said she loved me
That she was on her- way home
It was the last time- we'd talk
Before everything went- wrong

PS, I know this can be a good lyric when finished.

Speak soon,
Fran Williams


"Dreamin' Big Dreams", Wake Up And Go For Them smile