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Hey Richard,
Nice tune, enjoyed the listen. One nit: the first four lines give no indication that he's in a bar. If you take these lines away from the lyric...
Yeah, walked in tonight in a bad mood
I was sportin’ me an attitude
Hundred million things were on my mind
Needed me a break had to unwind
...he could just as easily be talking about walking into his house, a second or third shift job, or practically any place possible to go at night).
So let's put him in the bar:
Yeah, walked in the bar in a bad mood
I was sportin’ me an attitude
Hundred million things were on my mind
Needed me a break had to unwind
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