Hi Lisa and Aaron.
I do like the look of this lyric apart from this line.
"What moved you to depart?" I know it's difficult to rhyme with "heart" in a song.
Somehow it doesn't seem natural to me. (Maybe it's a British thing though)
Will be good to hear it with music.
Vic


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