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I've always found it hard to put lyrics to an existing melody so the best of luck with this one Lisa and Aaron, I'm sure it'll work well.
I latched on to Shayne's point immediately re the different lengths of the verses not however the structure, as shayne again mentioned.
Early days yet and I'm positive this can be sorted with a rewrite of two or was this your intention?
An excellent lyric although a little arty for me to get my head completely around lol
No suggestions right now only good luck with it
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