Hey you got your muse on!! Must be all those cookies giving you that sugar high. Short and sweet and I like your clever rhyming. Nothing's wrong w/the song, but I offer a few use or lose ideas.

In the 1st verse maybe say barmaid since right away you will establish it's a female so maybe...

I met a temptin' barmaid in Toledo

For your Chorus I thought it might sound neat if the 1st line always referred back to the woman so instead of:

(Chorus)
But I had to hit the street
Cause I got nomadic feet
I had to go I just couldn't stay
I must be moving on
And I'll miss her while I'm gone
Maybe we'll meet again someday

And although that girl was sweet
Seems I have nomadic feet
I had to go I just couldn't stay
I must be movin' on
And I'll miss her while I'm gone
Maybe we'll met again someday

Then maybe add on one more Chorus which will be your Final Chorus so you'll have 4 total (the song is short enough that it won't hurt)

Possible Final Chorus
Though the memories are sweet
Seems I'm no good on a leash
I had to go I just couldn't stay
Cos a rambler can't lay low
When it's time to go I go
But maybe we'll meet again someday
Yeah maybe we'll meet again someday or (Just maybe we'll meet again someday)

Best,
Lynn smile

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