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Lagoons
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/17/26 01:34 AM
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Söndörgő
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/17/26 12:01 AM
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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/16/26 01:51 AM
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Diverge
by Michael W. Brown - 09/14/26 03:50 PM
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Pictures
by CTthomas - 09/13/26 07:10 PM
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Hello Michael,
You have a wonderful hook/title! Very original!
But I honestly think you had way too many words
in the lyric.
Shayne did a great job of snipping away the
unneeded words while still keeping the meaning of
the lyric and using your terrific hook.
Diane
Diane Ewing
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