Very cool, Kristi smile

I dig your brother's voice - in the chorus it had a Neil Diamond feel for me.

The chorus is strong and memorable - and I love the message of the whole thing.

My only nit - I would have liked to hear pauses in some of the places where the next line comes really fast. In particular, after "sons" and "else" in the chorus. Those are pretty dramatic places in the music and milking it a little wouldn't hurt smile

Just one opinion. I really like it!

Scott