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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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Nice, inspirational theme. Is the music anything like what you envisioned it to be? I read the lyric first, and wasn't really anticipating the quasi-showtune vibe. It works, but it wouldn't have been my first inclination. Your chorus might be stronger if you ended it with "We leave a legacy" instead of starting it with that line. It is so much stronger than "By just being ourselves", that I think the song would be enhanced by having it in a more powerful position.
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