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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 01/20/26 03:26 PM
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Plazmatic
by Gary E. Andrews - 01/19/26 01:17 AM
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SXSW
by Gary E. Andrews - 01/18/26 12:08 AM
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by JAPOV - 01/17/26 01:22 PM
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https://suno.com/s/xHisnT6EN3S3mnRDI wrote the lyric and music to this, however, I have forgotten when the darn melody was, so I stuck in in Suno. It's not how it's supposed to be, but I still loved the premise of the lyric. Might do a re-write. not sure. Verse Mom, are you ok he said laughing at the sight I was flat on my back on the ground lookin up pre-chorus he said I've missed that step a hundred times but I figured out there's a trick I found and guess what? chorus Some times............... you gotta catch your self when you fall put your arms out if you can and reach for the nearest thing try to see where your gonna land verse teenage years, his light is on first broken heart is hard she tiptoes in "just saw the light" and how you are pre-chorus She said I've cried those tears a hundred times but I figured out there's a trick I found and guess what? chorus Some times................ you gotta catch your self when you fall put your arms out if you can and reach for the nearest thing try to see where your gonna land bridge be grateful every time someone lends you a hand but remember when you're all alone you've got two of your own CHORUS Some times................. you gotta catch your self when you fall put your arms out if you can and reach for the nearest thing try to see where your gonna land
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I like the message of this one, might not hurt for one more verse though.
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Well... so far it's just mother and son........... what do you propose?
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Passing of his grandparents.............left a mark on me
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Passing of his grandparents.............left a mark on me it's kinda hard to introduce a new character in verse 3. The song is about learning how to pick yourself up, but ask for help when you need it, BUT remember, you have hands of your own............so...... that being said.......maybe shift verse 3 back to the mother like in verse one, only now her son is all grown up and something happens.?
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Watching Football today.
Something for you to think of...his mother is his biggest fan. win or lose.
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I guess I better make that boy grow up and have a kid of his own or something
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maybe not the message is there , why introduce new characters
Last edited by bennash; 01/01/26 07:42 PM.
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Different roads, but the same means.
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broken heart, knocked him flat
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Need some help with that?
Catchy lyric…your sing would be good too. Can’t wait!
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ok guys, I drug my guitar out did a vocal in audacity and ran it through suno so you could hear the phrasing. does that help at all? https://suno.com/s/NyBbpfmG6iEKN6iM
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That sounds great. You are super Kay-Lynn. Phrases well. Sounds like U2 w T Swift singing. Rocks. Ending is really good. In my Kay folder.
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Well, high praise from you Bill.............. I know if you just read the lyric it looks funny, so glad I cleared up the melody. I appreciate you listening to anything I post, you're always a welcome voice.
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ok, once again, burying this topic til the name calling stops.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
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I can do this all day.. pushing the post down over and over til you stop
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Any other thoughts from the board would be appreciated. Thanks guys!
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